Monday, September 6, 2010

55er:She said "YES"

She was in bad mood. He had cancelled all plans for no apparent reason. Despite of being with friends she was lost in her own world. He had his plans. He went down on one knee holding the ring and asked the question. Her heart skipped a beat and tears rolled uncontrollably. She said "YES".

12 comments:

  1. Nice :-). Just purrfect, like "the" moment ;-).

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  2. Awwwww!!!!!
    That was truly a moment!! :)

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  3. @Di,siddhi : thanks a lot Dear :) ..Yes That was the movement :) :) ..
    @Axe : heheh :P Hav samake ghat :P ..Thanks

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  4. Frankly, I had thought it wouldn't be possible to describe the moment in 55 words - without all the melodrama.

    But you proved me wrong. And how! Couldn't have been put in better words :)

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  5. and i had thought it had happened a long long time ago..may be a re-commitment or reassurance was sought;).
    You have a way with 55er, Keep it up!:)

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  6. Just a tip for "her". All his actions, even the non-aparent ones are always for the greater good... :)

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  7. I wished I could scream here again the way I screamed there ;-)
    I really don't know how you put down that moment in 55 words! I would have written an Episodic story about it ;-)
    That was some moment! Not just for you, but even for all of us.....I've never seen a proposal like that......pure fairy tale!
    Congrats to u both!
    Muaaah! :-*

    ( see? even my comment is more than 55 words! ;-)

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  8. @kiran : Thanks dear ..seriously speaking i can not write big blogs..55 er suits me :P ..
    @Raghu:Thanks ..Yes dear it was sort if re-commitment or reassurance ..But with THE ring which is veryyyyy important.
    @Pramesh : Thanks for the tip :P :P
    @Janaki: Thanks dear, being close one together in that moment really matters. You are correct your comments are 63 words: P :P..I am pretty sure u will able to write episodic blog with twists and turns on this: P :P …This was my effort to capture the moment in the blog :P …

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  9. Congratulations to the Couple there in writeup.. :)

    I think they shudd throww a party to all well wishers cumin weekend.. and shudd take this to a whole new level of ;)

    Cheers!!!

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  10. congrats :)
    God bless you both...

    and yes.... PARTY!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  11. hi mukta! I loved this post. Luuuurrrrrrrrved it. B'ful...

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